Writing Assignments

2.1. Thesis statements

How to write your thesis statements

The thesis statement should:

• Directly relate to the task

• Do more than restate the question

• Be specific and use precise language

• Let your reader know your position or main argument

• Usually have two parts: subject and contention

Some examples:

Example essay question:  ‘Compare the relevance of two styles of AgitProp Theatre.’

This is NOT a thesis statement, because it does not assert a clear position:  'There are many styles of AgitProp Theatre that are relevant.'

This is a thesis statement, because it clearly states the argument and links to the topic:   ‘Boal’s Forum theatre is more relevant to today’s audiences than Brechtian theatre, because its stylistic elements are more accessible.’

Example essay question:  ‘Evaluate the relevance of Shakespeare’s works to today’s audiences.’

This is NOT a thesis statement, because it does not focus on the key element of the task:  ‘Shakespeare’s plays are very famous today.’

This is a thesis statement, because it clearly states the argument:  ‘Shakespeare’s works are only relevant to today’s audiences when they are contemporised.’

Example essay question:  ‘Discuss the importance of sustainable development in government policy’

This is NOT a thesis statement, because it does not assert anything or state a position:  ‘This essay will discuss sustainable development’.

This is a thesis statement, because it clearly states the argument:  ‘This essay will argue that sustainable development provides a practical framework for government policy’.

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